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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Rendering and technique is amazing.
1st- The body of the bike seems a little... squashed. Maybe check proportions?
2nd-Back tire is too small
3rd-From the straight down perspective, the back seems to be a little narrow to me
Overall: This is, as I said before, amazing. love the pen work. Watch the highlights on the tire and hubs, it doesn't match the rest as fluidly as possible
Now, I know you used a reference, and you took a lot of liscence with that, which is great. Love how you personalized the bike... just make sure you keep it functional/believable. Not much problem there, but since this is super realistic, you've got to make sure the proportions are realistic too.
All that being said, I'm still awed by this. 10x better than what I could do. keep it up man.
Note: Love the "S" design, very sleek
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